Comments on: Peter and Antonia

By: Damien Franco

Damien Franco — Tue, 04 Mar 2008 01:12:50 +0000

I agree with both comments above. I think what distracts me most is that everything seems to be sweeping away from the image. The girl is looking off to the right, the boy’s hair is sweeping off the right, even the shadows are moving your eyes to the right. That’s what is distracting the most to me. My eyes are pushed to the right too much.

By: Joseph

Joseph — Mon, 03 Mar 2008 20:57:00 +0000

Personaly I think this shot lacks the punch of your usual portrait work, and the guy’s face is wee on the soft side like focusing on the gal.

By: Rodion

Rodion — Mon, 03 Mar 2008 15:00:07 +0000

Not sure ’bout the composition. Its OK with the man but the girl… her position in the frame I mean. Maybe the focus accent could make it better… Not really sure…